In blog post 2 you but a fare enough of vocabulary words. The words you and I wore mentioned a few times. The idea that you said the bad thing about lying first and then you went to the good thing about it after words.
In blog post 1 you talked about that you wanted to choose your job not someone else to do it which i thought was great. One sentence that was my favorite was the one were you said" I want to make my own choices in life and learn from my mistakes." URL. http://brockiskl.blogspot.com/. I found this interesting because you wanted to learn from yours and others mistakes. Making your own choices is a big part of life and you wanted to make it your own choices. The thing that could be improved was that you used many words like I and my.
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